The Pearl (My First Post)

Published by Beth on Wednesday, January 10, 2007 at 1:55 AM

Busy took a breath
And came to realize
How lonely she was
Behind her disguise

Time took a minute
And came to find out
Watching time pass by
Is silly, no doubt

Patience took a pearl
And proved to this rhyme
A beauty created
Alone with much time.

Posted by Beth  

3 Comments:

  1. Wandering Poet said...
    January 10, 2007 at 7:04 PM  
    Such a simple yet creative poem. I enjoyed the first stanzas as how you seem to have personified time and busy and then have them experience/learn something.

    Good job : )
    Anonymous said...
    January 18, 2007 at 9:31 PM  
    I've seen some first poems and I've seen some.....first poems, you picking it up? This by far shows some talent, keep on coming man.
    Beth said...
    January 21, 2007 at 9:11 PM  
    Thank you both! :)

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